Correct option is D
Option
(d) contains an error.
Explanation: The subject of the final clause is
“the inertia” (singular noun). Therefore, the verb must agree in number and tense with a
singular subject in a formal, parallel construction.
Here,
“ends up” is present tense, but the main structure begins in the past:
“It was not merely…”
Hence, the clause should maintain tense consistency and use
past:
“ended up paralyzing…” (or “ends up” only if the whole sentence is framed as a present/general truth).
So, the error is tense inconsistency and faulty parallel alignment with the earlier past narration.
Correct usage:
ended up paralyzing
Corrected sentence:
“…which, though designed to safeguard institutional autonomy,
ended up paralyzing inter-departmental responsiveness altogether.”
Grammatical rule used:
·
Tense consistency: If the main verb is in past (was), related actions should usually stay in past unless expressing a timeless fact.
·
Parallel structure in “not… but…” sentences should maintain consistent grammatical style and time reference.
·
Example: It was not the plan that failed, but the execution that
ended up causing delays.
·
Information booster / exceptions:
· If the writer intends a
general truth, the whole sentence should shift to present: “It is not merely…, but … which … ends up …”