Correct option is D
Explanation & Corrections
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(A) — Incorrect (Inversion after a limiting adverb)
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Error:
Rarely we see…
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Rule: After fronted adverbs like
rarely, use inversion:
Rarely + do/does/did + subject + base verb.
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Correction: “
Rarely do we see managers modeling healthy boundaries during peak season.”
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(B) — Correct (Participial opener, logical subject)
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Encouraging collaboration correctly modifies
the new workspace; no dangling modifier.
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(C) — Correct (Perfect participle, logical subject)
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Having finished the sprint review refers to
the team; sequence and agreement are fine.
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(D) — Incorrect (Correlative with required inversion)
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Error:
No sooner the all-hands ended than… (missing auxiliary + inversion).
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Rule:
No sooner + had + subject + past participle + than + clause.
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Correction: “
No sooner had the all-hands
ended than teams rushed to finalize their reports.”
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(E) — Incorrect (Faulty participle/comma splice)
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Error:
Balance focus time with open communication, employees… (finite verb + comma splice).
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Fix (participle to match pattern): “
Balancing focus time with open communication, employees avoid unnecessary meetings.”
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(Alternative: “When employees
balance
focus time with open communication, they avoid unnecessary meetings.”)
Corrected paragraph:
(A)
Rarely do we see managers modeling healthy boundaries during peak season. (B) Encouraging collaboration, the new workspace reduces silos and speeds up feedback loops. (C) Having finished the sprint review, the team shared the action items on Slack. (D)
No sooner had the all-hands
ended than teams rushed to finalize their reports. (E)
Balancing focus time with open communication, employees avoid unnecessary meetings.