Correct option is D
The error lies in
part (A) of the sentence.
The pronoun "
it" doesn't make sense in the context of the sentence as it doesn't refer to any specific person or thing that can take pride in their appearance. It's unclear what "it" is referring to in this sentence.
Thus, the correct pronoun to use in this sentence is "
his".
Hence, the correct sentence formed will be “He took pride in his appearance and made sure to wear clean, pressed, and expensive clothes every day”